Assignment: Story-telling and Singular Theme
Shoot both a story-telling and singular theme image and turn in up to three favorties of either story telling and/or isolation.
Shoot both a story-telling and singular theme image and turn in up to three favorties of either story telling and/or isolation.
Storytelling 1
Storytelling 2
Storytelling 3
Here is the feedback:
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Member:
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Instructors, Chris Hurtt/Bryan Peterson
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Critique:
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Analiza, Lovely job this week and i love that you are
shooting with just the 35mm. Reminds me of my beginning days when I just had
a 50mm to work with and it was freeing in a way! Love your storytelling shots
and the one with the daffodils is lovely! I love the foreground interest
there and I love it so much I'd love to have it even more of a beginning. For
that, get lower to the ground which will push the flowers up higher in the
frame so that it will block out that empty dirt area there behind the flowers
and have the buildings be right behind the flower. Love the other two shots.
Storytelling 2 is really nice and I love the way you framed the scene in that
sculpture. But the storytelling 3 shot is really something! Love the middle
and end of the shot and the others do as well! You got two WOW comments and I
agree! A perfect picture there! Bryan
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